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Prompt: Hard-boiled detective novels are known for their use of vivid similes, often with an ironic or sarcastic tone. Novelist Raymond Chandler is particularly adept at these. Here are a few from his novels:
- A few locks of dry, white hair clung to his scalp, like wild flowers fighting for life on a bare rock.
- Dead men are heavier than broken hearts.
- From 30 feet away she looked like a lot of class. From 10 feet away she looked like something made up to be seen from 30 feet away.
Today, I’d like to challenge you to write a poem in which you describe something with a hard-boiled simile… use just one, or try to go for broke and stuff your poem with similes.
I read today’s prompt whilst I was out in the garden planting seeds. Rhyme and Reason wrote a thought-provoking poem.
The kind of blot
That none forgets,
A contrast to featured poem from Xanku– Front by Xan.
my address is
on the front of
my house but
my front door is
I loved the exploration in this one and that ending… perfect!
JESSICA BARKSDALE’S Zoo Story
was an intriguing poem, a force of poem which pulled me right in. A fantastic opening couplet:
Let’s not think about bears, or anything cute (and dangerous)
like a marriage, a first husband, and how things go wrong.
you once married to a bear
and now a giraffe, mother to a chimp, a steadfast rhino, stepmother
to a moth and a gecko, daughter to nocturnal beast undiscovered.
Next I read Broken Cabins on the Branch.
The furrowing of branches, of hardwood, of sun.
your hands statuary with tranchelight
There’s some beautiful imagery in this surreal poem.
‘Write a poem in which you describe something with a hard-boiled simile.‘
Before I had a clue about subject I went here to read some similes to get my evening brain working! I just had a quick glance over the list. I thought I would create 1 simile and then as I started to write I decided to incorporate more (not to total saturation).
I wrote the poem and made several drafts/ playing mainly with the white space. I have something I think I can work on and found myself not just writing similes but making links to traditional nursery rhyme characters and these two well known figures.
We demarcate with love
like Romeo and Juliet,
we’re not star-crossed
and don’t have a balcony.
I have used two similes but have chosen to share this part with you instead.