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They always came to this old Church, Gerry liked to read the visitors book. Gerry stared at the stained glass windows whilst Pip scribbled a hurried note, finishing with a personal message;
‘Gerry I will always love you. Pip xxx’
She sensed this could be their last holiday. She was right, a few months later Gerry left.
The following Summer Gerry walked up the hill alone, to the church. He looked around then made his way to the back of the Church, to the guest book. Admiring the brand new leather bound book, he opened it and read the messages.