Picture It & Write – A Poem About Eve



by Corrie White


At one with the universe

the entity appears

born from liquid

shaped by elements of the earth.

Wind twists the molten force

until Eve appears.


Womb consumed by temptation

Carries a bundle of sin.

Her roots stand firm

in the tides of time.

At one

with the universe.



This is my contribution to Picture and Write It for this week – follow the button. pictureitandwrite2copy-12

7 responses »

  1. I love how the ending matches the beginning. I like how you called her Eve. It can allude to so many things and brings more depth to the poem. Mysterious Eve. Thanks for contributing this week, Neens! 🙂

    – Ermisenda

  2. Pingback: I AM EVE | hastywords

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