Friday rolls around again and it’s time for a freewrite – Click the button if you’d like to join in on Kellie’s Blog.
Your FWF prompt this week is a word bank…
lazy – rain – perspective – glint – somber – trinket – static
You may use all seven words if they fill in naturally OR you may work off only one if it better feeds your page.
A glint of light
wakes you through the blinds,
You edge a lazy arm out from under
the covers and reach for the radio
Static noise invades your bedroom
as you roll over and turn the tuning button
You may as well get up now.
You take a somber walk to the bathroom
wishing your bones would wake from
the stiffness of the night.
You pull your charm bracelet off
with trinkets your lover bought you
last year,
a silver ballet shoe, a rose, a minute key.
You leave them on the sink and
walk under the water of the shower.
You feel the gentle water like rain
on your skin,
washing away the night’s perspiration.
Stepping out of the shower,
fresh, wet and clean
you see the day from a new
perspective as you wrap yourself
in a warm, fluffy, blue towel
Kellie – for some reason (and I have tried into double figures on 2 different laptops) I can’t get my posts to show on your thread – it doesn’t say waiting for moderation, at worst the page doesn’t display and at best it refreshes with 2 comments.
I tried to reply to Annie on FWF page and couldn’t. I did email you – but through fan mail (sorry) and I forgot to add that I now love the butterflies.
I will try back later, if you come across this maybe you can add the link onto the FWF thread. Cheers
If you are unable to post the thread then do a ping back or even both. By putting Kellie’s post address at the beginning or end of your post it will create a ping back 🙂 Great write – enjoyed it 🙂
Thanks I will try that – needed the tech walkthrough (BIG THANKS)
Glad you enjoyed it, I look forward to reading others, I was finding I couldn’t post comments though and that was frustrating.
You may have a problem with Askismet putting you into spam. Check that out. It happened twice to me, both for 2 month periods. If that is the case, get hold of them and let them know.
Thanks, when I have written my assignment I will pop back over to Kellie’s blog and see what I can do.
I have rebooted – the laptop was not doing as it was told at all!
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I enjoyed your poem. Great way to use all the words. Well done.
Thanks Suzanne, I hadn’t planned to use all the words, but then the poem took off and grew. 🙂
Beaytiful morning; beautiful poem. Nicely done!
Thanks Charles, glad you think so 🙂
Lovely poem, oh and to step out of the shower and wrap yourself up in a blue fluffy towel…heaven! 🙂
Well from the school of writing what you know – moments of this poem are true to life … It is heavenly 🙂 thanks for your comment 🙂
Loved this poem … being unable to step into a hot show and enjoy washing away the night,
I became the person in this poem … dreaming of the day I am free of my fracture and can enjoy my beloved showers again…thanks for this post!
Awww Thank you Annie for your kind comments – sorry to hear about your fracture, having had limbs in plaster before I know how good that 1st shower feels!
Loved you becoming the person in the poem.
Well done, poetic capturing of a morning routine, and good use of the prompt.
Thanks – I enjoyed trying to fit all the words in!
Loved this poem. Felt like I was stepping into the shower doing my best to wake up.
Thanks Heidi – I am glad that people feel themselves in this poem. It is certainly something we can all relate to, I guess that’s why we slip through the words.
I love this poem! Reminds me of me in the morning. Don’t forget the coffee!
Thanks Heather, me too – I am not a morning person. The coffee would be the next verse after the shower for me. Ahhhh sweet Java – having my first mug of the day just now actually!
Me, too. I am actually working on homework!
I’m trying to catch up with visiting blogs as I have had a busy weekend and have paperwork to do later!
Good luck with your studies.
Thank you.This week is the last one! Finals ah!
Good luck with all of that – I remember exam summer’s well, glad I don’t have to do that… I have recently felt grumpy about having to work, you reminded me what life was like before, I am glad of a four day working week this week though (Bank Holiday).
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